tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post4919546347478657256..comments2023-10-28T07:04:36.407-04:00Comments on I Think in Poems: I Want...Betsy Hubbardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-83444719474276719652013-05-30T21:56:20.189-04:002013-05-30T21:56:20.189-04:00Such power and emotion here. You can have all of t...Such power and emotion here. You can have all of this and more once you step beyond them. Shawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12089160847429622347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-43517754798696852482013-03-24T10:38:33.489-04:002013-03-24T10:38:33.489-04:00I love the first two lines! I vote for a poem fill...I love the first two lines! I vote for a poem filled with sewing images!!Mary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-20474749124643914382013-03-22T21:16:01.251-04:002013-03-22T21:16:01.251-04:00Such vivid descriptions! Your last line is my favo...Such vivid descriptions! Your last line is my favorite.Jaanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02027755562339582129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-46776957208976638202013-03-22T20:49:08.806-04:002013-03-22T20:49:08.806-04:00I like this! Thanks for sharing it.I like this! Thanks for sharing it.Ruthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-47385545687197777962013-03-22T19:56:01.667-04:002013-03-22T19:56:01.667-04:00Oh Betsy, you got me with this one. The emotion is...Oh Betsy, you got me with this one. The emotion is clear and strong in your word choice. The clincher line for me was this:<br><br>"I want to step past the erosion that explodes from my every opening."<br><br>Awesome...this is publishing your soul.Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132042235993262800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-11894854236288909932013-03-22T19:05:36.720-04:002013-03-22T19:05:36.720-04:00Lovely images, each and every one, Betsy. I espec...Lovely images, each and every one, Betsy. I especially like the first line, "I want to cut the ribbons of doubt that tangle my thoughts and web my happiness." That 'ribbons of doubt' is a very real image. I'd love to see what a visual artist would do with it, too.Linda at teacherdancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-73290313636233383492013-03-22T18:52:44.928-04:002013-03-22T18:52:44.928-04:00Loved this line:I want to gleam in the river of li...Loved this line:<br>I want to gleam in the river of light and swim in its ocean.<br><br>Beautiful poem, Betsy.Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-59631470594359564442013-03-22T16:04:49.560-04:002013-03-22T16:04:49.560-04:00Such powerful images plus alliteration for each li...Such powerful images plus alliteration for each line make this poem. Don't want much do you? :-)elsiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4661258709145271417.post-61277371578198429112013-03-22T13:58:02.112-04:002013-03-22T13:58:02.112-04:00What a lovely "I want" poem. Your words...What a lovely "I want" poem. Your words are strong and descriptive. I feel your passion for your life. Thank you.<br>http://show--nottell.blogspot.com/Deborah Bussewitzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11275286826634283515noreply@blogger.com