A place to dip my toe in the poetry pond.
Hi, Betsy. Something about the tone of your poem makes me picture a high school romance -- I think teens would really like this one.
Intense. A romance...or a spat?
This feels like a heated exchange to me. I love the depth of feeling in it. My favorite: "waves of doubt/swirl in and out."
Hi there Betsy, I agree with Tara. Intense. :)
I agree with the others -- hard to know what kind of exchange it is, but it's definitely intimate. Nice job!
Yes, yes, YES!!
Very nice, Betsy! No one can hide, indeed!
What a moment...hiding is hard in such a moment!