Poetry Friday is hosted by Author Amok this week. Join in and read some poetry with friends.
Words
flow free
from
you to me
and
waves of doubt
swirl
in and out
but
we don’t care,
we
stop and stare
in
each other’s eyes
no
one can hide.
Hi, Betsy. Something about the tone of your poem makes me picture a high school romance -- I think teens would really like this one.
ReplyDeleteIntense. A romance...or a spat?
ReplyDeleteThis feels like a heated exchange to me. I love the depth of feeling in it. My favorite: "waves of doubt/swirl in and out."
ReplyDeleteHi there Betsy, I agree with Tara. Intense. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others -- hard to know what kind of exchange it is, but it's definitely intimate. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteYes, yes, YES!!
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Betsy! No one can hide, indeed!
ReplyDeleteWhat a moment...hiding is hard in such a moment!
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