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Friday, September 6, 2013

Words Flow


Poetry Friday is hosted by Author Amok this week. Join in and read some poetry with friends. 


Words flow free
from you to me
and waves of doubt
swirl in and out
but we don’t care,
we stop and stare
in each other’s eyes
no one can hide.
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8 comments:

  1. Author AmokSeptember 6, 2013 at 12:07 PM

    Hi, Betsy. Something about the tone of your poem makes me picture a high school romance -- I think teens would really like this one.

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  2. Tara @ A Teaching LifeSeptember 6, 2013 at 9:02 PM

    Intense. A romance...or a spat?

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  3. RobinSeptember 6, 2013 at 9:22 PM

    This feels like a heated exchange to me. I love the depth of feeling in it. My favorite: "waves of doubt/swirl in and out."

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  4. GatheringBooksSeptember 6, 2013 at 9:58 PM

    Hi there Betsy, I agree with Tara. Intense. :)

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  5. RuthSeptember 7, 2013 at 7:35 AM

    I agree with the others -- hard to know what kind of exchange it is, but it's definitely intimate. Nice job!

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  6. Mary LeeSeptember 7, 2013 at 7:38 AM

    Yes, yes, YES!!

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  7. BJ LeeSeptember 8, 2013 at 3:43 PM

    Very nice, Betsy! No one can hide, indeed!

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  8. Amy LVSeptember 11, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    What a moment...hiding is hard in such a moment!

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